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-Whichever way we go for tickets, I’d encourage everyone to check out Zeffy.com. They are a non-profit built to help charities, and they offer several tools that could be potential revenue for the charity:
+Thanks! Whichever way we do go for tickets, I’d encourage everyone to check out Zeffy.com. They are a non-profit built to help charities, and they offer a few services that could be potential revenue for the charity:
 
 - Raffles: Easily sell raffle tickets online (lookup their "50/50" draws).
 - Donations: Set up one-off or monthly subscription donations.
 - Auctions: Run online auctions for donated prizes.
 - No Fees: Because they don't take a cut, we keep 100% of every donation and prize bid.
 
-Something I thought would be looking at
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+Thanks! Whichever way we do go for tickets, I’d encourage everyone to have a look at Zeffy.com. They offer a number of free services for raffles, 50/50 prize draws, prize auctions, or even just one-off donations for the charity. Quite a few good ideas for fund raising I thought
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